Thursday, April 16, 2015

Tiny Beautiful Things: Letter #7

I feel like I should start every post with that picture.
Oh, god.  You have no idea what's in store this time around.  Bad Cheryl is going to give some writing advice and I am going to lose my fucking mind.  Do whatever you need to do to mentally prepare yourselves for everything that follows.  Honestly, nothing will prepare you, but tequila might help.
Letter #7

The letter will be in bold, italicized type.  The comments I will be unable to refrain from making will be in regular type.  Let's do this.

Dear Sugar,

I write like a girl.  I hate you already.  I write about my lady life experiences, and that usually comes out as unfiltered emotion, unrequited love, and eventual discussion of my vagina as metaphor.  Please stop writing right now.  And that's when I can write, which doesn't happen to be true anymore.  Thank god.

Right now, I am a pathetic and confused young woman of twenty-six, a writer who can't write.  I totally agree with everything you just said.  I am up late asking you a question, really questioning myself.  I've sat here, at my desk, for hours, mentally immobile.  I bet.  I look up people I used to love and wonder why they never loved me.  I lie facedown on my bed and feel scared.  I get up, go to the computer, feel worse.  That's probably because you write things like this.

David Foster Wallace called himself a failed writer at twenty-eight.  You are no David Foster Wallace.  Several months ago, when depression hooked its teeth into me, I complained to my then-boyfriend about how I'll never be as good as Wallace; he screamed at me on Guerrero Street in San Francisco, "STOP IT.  HE KILLED HIMSELF, ELISSA.  I HOPE TO GOD YOU ARE NEVER LIKE HIM."  Don't worry, then-boyfriend.  Elissa will never be like DFW.  Also, the mention of Guerrero Street in San Francisco really added something special to the story.  I'm glad that was in there.  It's the sort of useless fact Cheryl Strayed likes to pepper into her stor--  hmmmm.

I understand women like me are hurting and dealing with self-trivialization, contempt for other, more successful people, misplaced compassion, addiction, and depression, whether they are writers or not.  Think of the canon of women writers; a unifying theme is that so many of their careers ended in suicide.  Yeah, instead of that, I'm going to think of all the female writers who didn't commit suicide; they outnumber the ones who did by a long shot.  STFU, you melodramatic assheap.  I often explain to my mother that to be a writer/a woman/a woman writer means to suffer mercilessly and eventually collapse in a heap of "I could have been better than this."  Being a woman has nothing to do with being a writer.  Also, being a "writer/woman/woman writer" decidedly does not automatically mean one has to "suffer mercilessly and eventually collapse in a heap of 'I could have been better than this.'"  You sound like a self-absorbed asshole.  She pleads with me: Can't it be different?  Yes, Elissa's mom, it can be different.  Your daughter is a twat.

Can it?  YES.  I want to jump out the window for what I've boiled down to is one reason: I can't write a book.  The window is right over there.  But it's not that I want to die so much as have an entirely different life.  I start to think that I should choose another profession-- as Lorrie Moore suggests, "movie star/astronaut, a movie star/missionary, a movie star/kindergarten teacher."  I've never heard of Lorrie Moore, but none of that bullshit made any sense.  Good job all around, everybody.  I want to throw off everything I've accumulated and begin as someone new, someone better.

I don't have a bad life.  I didn't have a painful childhood.  I know I'm not the first depressed writer.  Go fuck yourself, Elissa.  "Depressed writer"-- because the latter is less accurate, the former is more acute.  Learn how sentences work.  I've been clinically diagnosed with major depressive disorder and have an off-and-on relationship with prescription medication, which I confide so it doesn't seem I throw around the word "depression."  First of all, anyone with a pulse can get prescription medication, you fucktard.   You're not special.  Secondly, while I'm no doctor, I suspect the vague term "major depressive disorder" is synonymous with "nothing actually wrong, but asshole patient can't get over the fact that she's a shitty writer," so whoa, yeah, big problem you got there.  Sounds serious.  Lastly, you actually seem to enjoy throwing the word "depression" around.  You've used "depressed" or "depression" six times now.  Eat a bag of dicks.

That said, I'm high-functioning-- a high-functioning head case, one who jokes enough that most people don't know the truth.  I bet you're super funny.  The truth: I am sick with panic that I cannot-- will not-- override my limitations, insecurities, jealousies, and ineptitude, to write well, with intelligence and heart and lengthiness.  Your panic is justified.  And I fear that even if I do manage to write, that the stories I write-- about my vagina, etc.-- will be disregarded and mocked.  Oh, come now.  I bet "Elissa's Vagina" will be a New York Times bestseller.

How do I reach the page when I can't lift my face off the bed?  How does one go on, Sugar, when you realize you might not have it in you?  How does a woman get up and become the writer she wishes she'd be?

Elissa Bassist

Holy shit, this dumbass used her real name.  You know how I feel about fact-checking, so it goes without saying that I immediately Googled the shit out of Elissa Bassist.  As it turns out, she has her very own website.  She has a bunch of tabs on the top of her page, one of which is "Books Published."  I clicked on it.  Here's a screenshot of what happened when I did that:

This is when I howled with laughter and couldn't stop for a good five minutes.  I guess Bad Cheryl's super awesome advice didn't do one or two or even three bits of good for Elissa Bassist.  Let's see what she had to say to Elissa.
(Please note, it takes Bad Cheryl THREE FUCKING PAGES to write anything that even starts to resemble advice.  She needs to talk about herself first because Cheryl Strayed.)
Let's get on with it.
Bad Cheryl starts with,
"When I was twenty-eight I had a chalkboard in my living room.  It was one of those two-sided wooden A-frames that stand on their own and fold flat.  On one side of the chalkboard I wrote, 'The first product of self-knowledge is humility,' Flannery O'Connor, and on the other side I wrote, 'She sat and thought of only one thing, of her mother holding and holding onto their hands,' Eudora Welty."

What is with this woman's giant boner for Flannery O'Connor.

"The quote from Eudora Welty is from her novel The Optimist's Daughter, which won the Pulitzer Prize for Fiction in  1972.  It was a book I read again and again, and that line about the woman who sat thinking of only one thing was at the heart of the reason why.  I sat like that too."
 --except not, because Bad Cheryl doesn't understand what "only one thing" means--

"Thinking of only one thing."
That's not a sentence.

"One thing was actually two things pressed together, like the back-to-back quotes on my chalkboard: how much I missed my mother and how the only way I could bear to live without her was to write a book.  My book.  The one that I'd known was in me since way before  knew people like me could have books inside of them.  The one I felt pulsing in my chest like a second heart, formless and unimaginable until my mother died, and there it was, the plot revealed, the story I couldn't live without telling."

OH MY FUCKING GOD.  "Two things pressed together" ≠ one thing.

She continues, telling Elissa Bassist that she was totes bummed out by the fact that she hadn't written a book by the age of twenty-eight.  She notes, however, that she was still super awesome and way better than Elissa Bassist in one of her signature sentence fragments:

"Without a book, but not entirely without literary acclaim."

She's too amazing for failure.  I'm in awe.  She then brags about how she "read voraciously" and "practically memorized the work of writers" she loved.  In a display of modesty, she explains,

"I recorded my life copiously and artfully in my journals."

She finishes up the paragraph with,

"I wrote stories in feverish, intermittent bursts, believing they'd miraculously form a novel without my having to suffer too much over it."

This sentiment sounds so familiar...

"As I hiked, I pondered the ice ax that would be in my resupply box.  The ice ax that allegedly belonged to me.  It was black and silver and dangerous-looking, an approximately two-foot-long metal dagger with a shorter, sharper dagger that ran crosswise at the end.  I bought it, brought it home, and placed it in the box labeled Kennedy Meadows, assuming that by the time I actually reached Kennedy Meadows I would know how to use it-- having by then been inexplicably transformed into an expert mountaineer."
--Wild, Chapter 6, page 89 
Why does this woman think that she is under no obligation to put forth any effort in any circumstance?  Why does she seem to be under the impression that things should just magically happen?
Oh, wait.  I spoke too soon.  She has an epiphany.
"As my thirtieth birthday approached, I realized that if I truly wanted to write the story I had to tell, I would have to gather everything within me to make it happen.  I would have to sit and think of only one thing longer and harder than I thought possible.  I would have to suffer.  By which I mean work."

Oh, man.  You're gonna have to *work* for something?

She then spends three paragraphs writing sentence fragments until,

"In short, I had to gain the self-knowledge that Flannery O'Connor mentions in that quote I wrote on my chalkboard.  And once I got there I had to make a hard stop at self-knowledge's first product: humility."

Then this happens:

"Do you know what that is, sweet pea?  To be humble?"

We're then treated to a Latin lesson on the origin of the word humility and I'd totally tell you all about it, but I'm busy sponging my brains off of the wall.

She spends a couple paragraphs explaining how she's pretty much the best at being humble and starts the next paragraph with,

"I hope you'll think hard about that, honey bun.  If you had a two-sided chalkboard in your living room I'd write humility on one side and surrender on the other for you."

Oh, jesus.

"The most fascinating thing to me about your letter is that buried beneath all the anxiety and sorrow and fear and self-loathing, there's arrogance at its core."

Cheryl Strayed is writing about humility and arrogance because Cheryl Strayed.

Blah, blah, blah, then she tells Elissa that she probably won't be taken seriously as a writer because she's a girl and what the fuck.  She follows with,

"It's still true that literary works by women, gays, and writers of color are often framed as specific rather than universal, small rather than big, personal or particular rather than socially significant."
I don't even.  She finally gets to something that could pass for advice, and she fucks it all up:
"Write so blazingly good that you can't be framed."

Yeah.  WRITE GOOD.  Excellent advice.  Brilliant.  I guess now we know why Elissa hasn't written a book yet.
"Writing is hard for every last one of us-- straight white men included.  Coal mining is harder.  Do you think miners stand around all day talking about how hard it is to mine for coal?  They do not.  The simply dig."
Illustrating what it means to write good, Bad Cheryl says, 
"You need to do the same, dear sweet arrogant beautiful crazy talented tortured rising star glowbug."

She finishes everything with,
"So write, Elissa Bassist.  Not like a girl.  Not like a boy.  Write like a motherfucker."

That's it?  Write good and write like a motherfucker?  Good luck with that advice, Elissa.  Can't wait to read about your vagina.


  1. Mind. Blown. I want to...but I just can't.

    Also, I thought the salvation from her mother's death was an irresponsibly unprepared "hike" along the PCT. Now she's saying the only salvation from her mother's death was writing a book. It seems like even Cheryl Strayed can't bring herself to read a Cheryl Strayed book.

  2. her mom has been gone 24 years and I hate to say it but isn't she beating a dead horse no she still is all about her mother and when she talks about books is she talking about wild or torched torch was her first book she called fiction but quoted me in the book and really I think it was her blue print to wild

  3. Just finished up some minor dental work (two small filings). Prefer the dental work to Cheryl's answer.

  4. Did you see this?

    1. OH MY GOD. I read that today and I think it's worthy of its very own post on here. At one point, I literally threw my phone down on the seat next to me because I couldn't stand what I was reading.

    2. I just finished reading the "mofo" article. How convenient it's an email exchange, even more so it sounds like Cheryl Sprayed having a conversation with herself. **cough*publicitystunt*cough**!

      Also, you should look into writing for My wife (soon to be ex?) does occasionally and they pay $50 - $200 per article. I think you are totally qualified and it would be another outlet for your writing prowess.

      I sure all of us would hate to lose you due to a head explosion from reading CS's (hard swallow) profound work (now please shoot me in the face).

  5. I hate how she calls people "sweet pea," "honey bun," etc. It's absolutely condescending and rude to use such names to people you don't know and who are supposedly writing to you as an agony aunt to help them with some problem in their life. But we know (it's transparent as hell) that these fake people are all Cheryl, just making up characters so she can give herself advice (because fuck real people, they are just a pain in the ass!). The dimestore-novel writing quality gives her away. Real people just don't write that way.

    I want to draw "Elissa" a map to the nearest window.

  6. Once again, how does Cheryl think that she is qualified to give advice to someone who alleges that they have "major depressive disorder"? At first, I thought the Behavioral Science Board might go after her for "counseling without a license (or brain)," but I'm certain that they have also figured out that the letters are fake!

  7. Cali...I think the phrase "Do you know what that is, sweet pea? To be humble?" is worthy of a triple head explosion. Come on now, don't start going easy on her!

    1. I'm tempted to take your advice and amend my singular head explosion, but Alison's sister is now reading the blog and her only complaint was something like, "I wish she would stop inserting the guy from 'Scanners' in there. That movie gave me nightmares as a kid." I'm going to be mindful of the mental well-being of Alison's sister. (Just know that I wanted to have at least ten exploding heads after that bullshit.)

    2. What about a melty-face ala' Raiders of the Lost Ark....that would work as well. Especially with some of Cheryl's "observations."

    3. My sister appreciates your concern for her well-being.

    4. Please tell your sister that I will try my best to refrain from using the Scanners guy GIF. Please also tell her that I can't make any solid promises. I'm reading Cheryl Strayed books.

  8. And even though it appears as though letter #7 might have been authored by a real person, namely Elissa Bassist, she is a contributor on the same website (The Rumpus) on which Cheryl posted her "Dear Sugar" column. How coincidental and convenient.

  9. This is just much shit. As I was reading this, thinking another made up by Bad Cheryl letter and then, a made up article by Bad Cheryl with another made-up person (Elyssa); Bad Cheryl has made a career of lying and lying and lying. We already knew that.

    Because of this blog, and other commenters on Goodreads, etc., SOMEDAY, Bad Cheryl will be publicly taken down. I only hope it is during my lifetime.

  10. I agree, Cindi - have you read some of the one-star reviews of "Wild" on Amazon? They're also quite entertaining. We should all get together when this blog ends and have a book burning party. I'm one match away from burning my copy of "Wild."

    1. Don't burn it, Pamela. Save it, and when we all meet up, I'll underline all of my favorite passages and autograph it for you. We could even invite Bad Cheryl.

      "Dear Cheryl,

      My Book Club is hosting a 'Wild' party and we would be profoundly grateful if you would attend. I know you charge a lot of money for the pleasure of your company; we've raised at least 18 bazillion dollars. Please come. WE HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS FOR YOU.

      Hugs and Kisses,
      Somebody Who Totally Doesn't Hate You"

      Think she'd fall for it?

    2. More than likely - she is just that stupid. But, just to be certain, I think you should also throw in an offer of some free condoms.

    3. I'm so in for the book burning party (even though I didn't buy her book; I got it from the library and quit at the 2nd page in chapter 4). I did rue the gas I spent driving to and from the library, though). We should have the burning party at one of the campgrounds on the PCT!

    4. Sounds good, Cindi and Cali, I'll put away the match for now.

  11. I had a lot to say about this one, but I'll settle for sharing one thought in particular...

    THESE TERMS OF ENDEARMENT DON'T MAKE YOU ENDEARING, CHERYL. THEY MAKE ME WANT TO PUNCH YOU. Or lock your head between the slats of that two sided chalkboard. I'll even leave "humility" and "surrender" written on it for you, you know, since they'll be so relevant to that situation.

  12. On Elissa Bassist's website there is a FAQ bio that says:

    "My last name rhymes with “assist.” In the ‘90s, when I purchased CDs at Tower Records, I would be asked if I played the bass, and I had no idea what the dumb idiot behind the counter meant by this. "

    Her last name is Bassist. Who is the dumb idiot?

    1. Who indeed, Guy! Not to mention, the guy asking her that (if this really happened) works at a RECORD STORE!

    2. First off, I love everything about this site, your writing, and the fact that every comments section is a collection of people as surly as I.

      I looked up and vomited at the Rumpus piece and Elissa's site after reading this, and a quick cross reference puts her age at 26 in 2010. Meaning in "the 90s" she was between 5 and 15 years old. Meaning for the Tower employee to have known her name she either had to have been shouting it, wearing it on a shirt. Or Elissa Bassist is the youngest debit card holder ever.

      Or she's embellishing/ llying, like the boundless evil that spawned her. MY MONEY IS ON LIES

  13. "the stories I write -- about my vagina"

    That phrase is going to haunt me now. I'm going to be sitting in some hellishly boring meeting at work and it's going to pop up in my head. I'll start laughing and weeping uncontrollably. People will be concerned. Everything will become awkward. Human Resources will get involved. My career will be SHATTERED. CRUSHED. PROFOUNDLY ALTERED FOREVER, like a black toenail tossed off a snow-capped mountain that exists only in my head.

    Thanks, Cheryl/Elissa.

    Meanwhile, I'm waiting for Cheryl's special, special guest appearance on "Catfish."

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  16. I have a degree in journalism and I can't believe what I just read. This was actually published?? How are women writers, or even women in general, supposed to be taken seriously when something like this is published for writing advice? My mind is blown.